I really enjoyed watching your advert. I liked the editing that was used. I like the bit where you used different parts of the face to make a whole one. That was effective. Visually there was too much going on. The music at the end just ended suddenly, you could have faded the music a little towards the end. Other than, it was really good! (Y)
I thoroughly enjoyed your advert it really appealed to the target audience, it had a very girly feel to it which was nice. The use of different locations and editing techniques worked well.The only criticism i have is that the different styles didn't merge together well.
I think the advert reached the target market and while i was watching it i found it very interesting and didn't want to look away. The only criticism is that the audio wasn't cut very well.
I liked the colour effect when everything but the main character was black and white, it gave the feel that the make up made her stand out from the crowd. The ad would do a lot better with a lot less things and storylines going on at the same time.
i loved the advert. it really appealed to me. i understood the product and was entertained. however i do believe the concept of the video and storyline should be more straightforward
I liked the advert the use of visual effects was very good and also the use of different places in different shots worked very well. the only thing that could be improved is the ending i though it cut out to quick.
I really liked the effects in the advert. i thought the black and white background with certain objects turning blue whilst you were walking was a brilliant creative idea. i also liked the effect with the faces going down in lines showing one full face. The music also fitted in very nicely to the advert.
I liked the advert a lot i think that it was effective in meeting the target market because it was quite a girly advert. I liked the effects at the beginning and when 'Mac' was being written on the mirror i think they both looked really good and i also liked when the screen was split and had different faces put together to make one face. I think to make it a bit better there could of been a narrative and maybe a voice over when Karina is mouthing 'Mac'
I like the editing in this advert , you made it very clear what your product was , i think you could have done better transitions but overall it was a nice advert to watch , well done :)
i enjoyed the advert it appealed to your target audience and there was a very creative and bubble side to the advert. the editing techniques was very creative and different to others that i saw. I loved the bit where you cut up the shots of different features. the only negative i would of like to see the product more. But the advert would made me want to buy the product. Well Done.
I really enjoyed watching your advert. I liked the editing that was used. I like the bit where you used different parts of the face to make a whole one. That was effective. Visually there was too much going on. The music at the end just ended suddenly, you could have faded the music a little towards the end. Other than, it was really good! (Y)
ReplyDeleteI thoroughly enjoyed your advert it really appealed to the target audience, it had a very girly feel to it which was nice. The use of different locations and editing techniques worked well.The only criticism i have is that the different styles didn't merge together well.
ReplyDeleteI think the advert reached the target market and while i was watching it i found it very interesting and didn't want to look away. The only criticism is that the audio wasn't cut very well.
ReplyDeleteColourful advert, nice use of music.. then uses of edits and techniques were beautifully executed, but the styles in it.. i wasn't feeling it :D
ReplyDeleteI liked the colour effect when everything but the main character was black and white, it gave the feel that the make up made her stand out from the crowd. The ad would do a lot better with a lot less things and storylines going on at the same time.
ReplyDeletei loved the advert. it really appealed to me. i understood the product and was entertained. however i do believe the concept of the video and storyline should be more straightforward
ReplyDeleteYour advertisment is well written; good use of effects and camera shots. I liked your use of music aswell it went with the footage really well.
ReplyDeleteI liked the advert the use of visual effects was very good and also the use of different places in different shots worked very well. the only thing that could be improved is the ending i though it cut out to quick.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the effects in the advert. i thought the black and white background with certain objects turning blue whilst you were walking was a brilliant creative idea. i also liked the effect with the faces going down in lines showing one full face. The music also fitted in very nicely to the advert.
ReplyDeleteI liked the advert a lot i think that it was effective in meeting the target market because it was quite a girly advert. I liked the effects at the beginning and when 'Mac' was being written on the mirror i think they both looked really good and i also liked when the screen was split and had different faces put together to make one face.
ReplyDeleteI think to make it a bit better there could of been a narrative and maybe a voice over when Karina is mouthing 'Mac'
I like the editing in this advert , you made it very clear what your product was , i think you could have done better transitions but overall it was a nice advert to watch , well done :)
ReplyDeletei enjoyed the advert it appealed to your target audience and there was a very creative and bubble side to the advert. the editing techniques was very creative and different to others that i saw. I loved the bit where you cut up the shots of different features. the only negative i would of like to see the product more. But the advert would made me want to buy the product. Well Done.
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